Where I write a little fiction, join some challenges, and have a little fun!
Wednesday, February 3, 2016
The Split
I knew Pete and Rocky from doing a stretch at Joliet; our wheelman was Pete's little brotherBenny. We hit the bank hard and fast, nabbed all the cheddar for ourselves. One hour and three shots later, it was a one-way split.
That is as good as you can get for a story that short
ReplyDeleteThank you Joeh!
ReplyDeleteWhat an adventure!
ReplyDeleteIn the short term, crime CAN pay! Lol
DeleteNo honor among thieves, what is the world coming to?
ReplyDeleteThe only way to keep a secret is if only two people know it...and one of them is dead!
DeleteThat's great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jennifer! :-)
DeleteNice use of cheddar as money, Joe. The image complements your story well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Charlotte, I guess it was too many old gangster movies that made me immediately make that connection.
DeleteYou have a relaxed writing style I like. Love the story.
ReplyDeleteI thank you Michelle. From someone who does what you do for a living, that means a lot to me!
DeleteIt's hard to tell a big story in few words, and you nailed it. This is great!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deb, good to see you again!
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