Wednesday, January 27, 2016

To Brodgar Circle


I spy the stone at Brodgar bridge,
That marks the mystic way.
I seek the circle by the loch,
For 'tis there I go to pray.
I would give my land and all I am,
Just to hold her one more day.
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  1. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM

    Love. I especially love how you can write absolutely anything. I really love this a lot.

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    1. Joe OrmerodJanuary 27, 2016 at 1:30 PM

      Thanks Karen, poetry is definitely not my forte...but I thought I'd give it a try.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 27, 2016 at 1:00 PM

    Your entry has a pleasing fluid quality.

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    1. Joe OrmerodJanuary 27, 2016 at 1:31 PM

      Thank you Charlotte, trying uncharted waters here...LOL

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  3. JoJanuary 27, 2016 at 2:17 PM

    This is beautifully done.

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  4. Joe OrmerodJanuary 27, 2016 at 3:15 PM

    Thanks Joeh, I appreciate you dropping by.

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  5. LIVJanuary 27, 2016 at 3:57 PM

    This is breathtaking.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2016 at 7:36 PM

    I hope the narrator's wishes are granted by the mystic power of the circle. And kudos for testing the waters with poetry; I won't be so brave.

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    1. Joe OrmerodJanuary 28, 2016 at 8:56 PM

      Thanks, got me kicked from the grid though...Lol
      But nothing ventured, nothing gained! Thanks for reading.

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  7. UnknownFebruary 1, 2016 at 9:21 AM

    I really like this!! Love the image you painted with your words and the emotions you evoked. This is good. ❤️

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