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Wednesday, January 13, 2016
Bad Luck
"Wanna go to a party?" "Sure," she slurred, "wh-where at?" "I got a buddy throws wild parties out on his farm..." "Let's go!" We stepped into the clearing, bodies dancing around a bonfire... and altar. "A sacrifice? The Master will be pleased!"
Omg! Just to check whether I understood this story that he convinces a girl for the party and actully get sacrificed in this hell ritual! am I right? If yes, the story is simply awesome!
Oh, dear. Beware after parties!
ReplyDeleteCautionary tale: Be careful who you leave the bar with...Lol
DeleteUhhh, oops! Wrong party! ;)
ReplyDeleteThat it was...
DeleteI guess she was the life of the party.
ReplyDeleteThe main attraction! Lol
DeleteHhhmm.. I may have attended one of those parties.. Or it was my wedding.. I can't remember. :)
ReplyDeleteLol Karen...at least you made it back! ;-)
DeleteOmg! Just to check whether I understood this story that he convinces a girl for the party and actully get sacrificed in this hell ritual! am I right? If yes, the story is simply awesome!
ReplyDeleteYes Sheetal, that was my intent. Thank you so much for your kind words, they are very much appreciated!
DeleteThat would be just my luck, no parties in ages then the one you end up going to, someone eat's your heart. Typical!
ReplyDeleteMy luck too Squid!!! LOL
DeleteThanks for reading and the comment!
Oh wow, that is not what I was expecting. A friendly little bonfire perhaps, but a sacrifice?? Holy shit! Run! This was great. Loved it Joe! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy! Be careful who you leave the bar with! Lol
DeleteYikes!
ReplyDeleteLol!
DeleteOMG! That was startling and shocking at the same time. Came through Kathy's.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by Ajay, and of course my thanks to Kathy for sending you over!
DeleteTalk about bad luck! lol!
ReplyDeleteThat's some of my kind of luck right there! Lol
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