Where I write a little fiction, join some challenges, and have a little fun!
Wednesday, November 25, 2015
The sun sets...
We were once ubiquitous throughout the West, like sagebrush, tumbleweeds, and sunsets. But, as the sun sets so did our days, technology made an end of us. That's why true cowboys are so hard to find.
This is very poetic. I like the balance you got with the words: "like sagebrush, tumbleweeds, and sunsets".
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and your kind words!
DeleteI really like this.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tooie! Glad to see you, Thank you for stopping by!
DeleteAh, but I do love me some cowboys.. There are still a few left. Great piece, as always Joe. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dear Karen! <3
DeleteMade me a bit misty for the time, as rough as it probably was.
ReplyDeleteThank you, TMW.
DeleteTechnology has changed so many things. Some good, some bad. So nostalgic and melancholy. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gina, for reading and your frequent comments. They are appreciated!
DeleteWonderful cowboy microstory!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Charlotte!!!
DeleteA real cowboy! Oh yeah,there still are some for sure and I am so glad.
ReplyDeleteThis is very nostalgic and the cadence is perfect.
Love it. 💙
Thank you so much Jo!
Deletegood job joe! enjoyed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tracie, I'm glad you enjoyed it...the 42 word limit is a challenge for me, being as "wordy" as I am! Lol
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