Wednesday, February 3, 2016

The Split

I knew Pete and Rocky from doing a stretch at Joliet; our wheelman was Pete's little brother Benny. We hit the bank hard and fast, nabbed all the cheddar for ourselves. One hour and three shots later, it was a one-way split.

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  1. That is as good as you can get for a story that short

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  2. No honor among thieves, what is the world coming to?

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    1. The only way to keep a secret is if only two people know it...and one of them is dead!

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  3. Nice use of cheddar as money, Joe. The image complements your story well.

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    1. Thanks Charlotte, I guess it was too many old gangster movies that made me immediately make that connection.

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  4. You have a relaxed writing style I like. Love the story.

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    1. I thank you Michelle. From someone who does what you do for a living, that means a lot to me!

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  5. It's hard to tell a big story in few words, and you nailed it. This is great!

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