Wednesday, January 27, 2016

To Brodgar Circle


I spy the stone at Brodgar bridge,
That marks the mystic way.
I seek the circle by the loch,
For 'tis there I go to pray.
I would give my land and all I am,
Just to hold her one more day.


14 comments:

  1. Love. I especially love how you can write absolutely anything. I really love this a lot.

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    1. Thanks Karen, poetry is definitely not my forte...but I thought I'd give it a try.

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  2. Your entry has a pleasing fluid quality.

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    1. Thank you Charlotte, trying uncharted waters here...LOL

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    1. Thank you Jo, and thanks for stopping by!

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    1. Thanks Joeh, I appreciate you dropping by.

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  5. I hope the narrator's wishes are granted by the mystic power of the circle. And kudos for testing the waters with poetry; I won't be so brave.

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    1. Thanks, got me kicked from the grid though...Lol
      But nothing ventured, nothing gained! Thanks for reading.

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  6. I really like this!! Love the image you painted with your words and the emotions you evoked. This is good. ❤️

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    1. Thank you Kathy, nice of you to say so. ;-)

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